Chapter 1: sun

FuzzyFur Walked from his den to the open and saw some kits Playing. "I wish I was a kit again." Just then FireStar came out of his den and saw FuzzyFur watching the kits play. "fuzzyfur, I need you to go on a patrol with BrambleClaw and GrayStripe." FuzzyFur Looked at FireStar and said "Ok FireStar."
Fuzzyfur went Over to Graystripe. "Hey Graystripe!"
GrayStripe Looked at Fuzzyfur. "Yes?"
FuzzyFur Got to GrayStripe and said "FireStar Said I have to go with you and Brambleclaw" GrayStripe Looked at FuzzyFur And Said "Ok." FuzzyFur, GrayStripe, and BrambleClaw Headed off to off hunt.
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Chapter 1 Note.

Before you post in the first chapter Please make your character. thank you

do we make up a story for our character or do we add on to yours?

Midna-Twilight wrote:

do we make up a story for our character or do we add on to yours?

You Start of with your character and then around a couple post later are characters run into each other

As the sun blazed on, RedSky: the beautiful silver and white she-cat of ShadowClan went on a stroll through the woods. She saw a rabbit sitting in the grass. . . she positioned herself in a hunting stance and thought to herself If I can bring this to the clan they'le not think i'm useless! RedSky was just made a warrior and just because she did very well on a mission and most of the cats in the clan didn't think she was fit to be a warrior. The rabbit looked plump and fast so she twitched her tail and pounced. She flung It in the air and caught it in her mouth bit hard and soon the rabbit lay motionless in her jaws. "Finally" she thought to herself. "My first prey as a warrior"

Good Right?

Midna-Twilight wrote:

As the sun blazed on, RedSky: the beautiful silver and white she-cat of ShadowClan walked went on a stroll through the woods. She saw a rabbit sitting in the grass. . . she positioned herself in a hunting stance and thought to herself If I can bring this to the clan they'le not think i'm useless! RedSky was just made a warrior and just because she did very well on a mission and most of the cats in the clan didn't think she was fit to be a warrior. The rabbit looked plump and fast so she twitched her tail and pounced. She flung It in the air and caught it in her mouth bit hard and soon the rabbit lay motionless in her jaws. "Finally" she thought to herself. "My first prey as a warrior"

Good Right?

very good
Now where was I?
oh ya

The sun was setting it was getting harder to see in the dark especialy when eagles and other big animals were going through the forest
"Hey Graystripe, BrambleClaw, Think we should leave now?" Said Fuzzyfur He was confused though since there was no reply, realising they weren't with him He looked around a bit. Getting tired, He went and layed down on the ground."Mabye I can find my way back later" Thought FuzzyFur, He haden't realised he laid down in Shadowclans territory though.

On RedSky's way back to ShadowClan she saw something furry laying beyond the bushes. "If I bring back more prey,"she thought to herself. "My clan will not only except me, but they will respect me too" RedSky grinned. She buried her rabbit under a pile of leaves so she could get it later. Then, she positioned herself. Twitched her tail and pounced. . .

"GYA!!!" Fuzzyfur yelled jumping, landing on the ground looking at the cat that pounced on him"Hey your a shadowclan warrior! what are you doing in thunderclan!" Said Fuzzyfur, after looking at the cat more he said "wait....Redpaw?what are you doing out of your camp? I saw you at the last gathering." said FuzzyFur confused.

"FuzzyPaw?!" RedSky asked startled. "Is that you? I'm not in ThunderClan your in ShadowClan territory!" she said "I thought you were prey. . " She got off of FuzzyFur, and stood up proudly I'm not RedPaw anymore by the way, I'm RedSky. Its good to see you again. . .so hows ThunderClan?"

"Oh..Just go's to show how lost I am" Said FuzzyFur, "and My names FuzzyFur Now. I'm a new warrior also." Said FuzzyFur getting up. "Well Guess I'd Best leave now." Said FuzzyFur, As he started to walk away.
But then he smelled somthing weird "hey do you smell that?"

"Smell what?" she asked. RedSky was not a very good tracker with scent. her mentor often ignored her so most of the time she had to train herself. Then, the smell was so strong she could smell it. "FuzzyFur!!!" she yelled "Over there!!"

As He looked over to where RedSky was looking He saw Eyes He smelled again and released it was a badger"A badger!" Yelled FuzzyFur, "what are we going to do?" Said fuzzyFur Looking at RedSky.

"We can't fight one this big! Follow me FuzzyFur!" she said quickly. "Follow me!" They ran through the woods as fast as they could. but the badger was still on their tail" Finally they stopped. "In here" RedSky said. Then she ran down a tunnel hidden in the bushes. "She stopped. Come on!! The badger wont find us here!"

You do know You can talk my character right?

Anyways



"That was close." Said Fuzzyfur Breathing slowly. "What do you think we should do I'm a thunderclan cat! surely some warriors will smell my scent even when I leave or worse catch us here, They won't trust you at all and *Gulp* who knows what they'll do to me." Said FuzzyFur worried."We can't leave either!" Said Fuzzfur adding on.

"It doesn't matter about me. My clan doesn't trust me as it is. I'll keep my clan away until the smell wears away. . wait! Your clan will trust you if you bring back that badger!! I'll be right back I'll go kill it!" RedSky said. "WAIT!!" yelled FuzzyFur. But it was to late. . RedSky had allready caught up with the badger. .

"Snap! what am I gonna do!"said Fuzzyfur, Running after her "Of all the crazy things she could've done she did this!" said FuzzyFur, Finnaly catching up, Looking With eyes wide RedSky Was Clawed onto the back of the badger "Wait for me!"FuzzyFur yelled, Running torwards the badger Fuzzy fur Slipped on a rock and slid under the badger. "Errr, Hi! eh heh" Said fuzzyFur Looking at the badger FuzzyFur Qucikly Swiped His claws across the face of the badger and jumped away. "Ha! This is easy!"
Said FuzzyFur, The badger Ran straight for FuzzyFur with RedSky Still dangling on top if the badger "GAH!" Yelled FuzzyFur As The badger got closer With little thinking FuzzyFur Ran straight for the Neck of The badger And With a swift blow The badger Fell to the ground. "What did I just do?"
said FuzzyFur Confused.

"heh, sorry FuzzyFur " RedSky said shamefully. "I guess I was caught up in the moment. . . Thank you for saving me." She finished. "well, you can keep the badger. . . .see you at the next clan gathering. It's tomorrow right? Bye. . " RedSky said while she was strolling back to ShadowClan.
(you can talk as my character if you want)

"Bye!" said FuzzyFur as he walked away.
-Back at the ThunderClan-
"Amazing!"Said Firestar "you managed to Catch and kill the badger by yourself!" said Firestar looking at the body of the dead badger. "Sorta The head of the Badger was in ThunderClans territory The back was in ShadowClans I did A swift blow to the neck as the ShadowClan cat Clinged on to the back" Said FuzzyFur in a happy mood
"There's a tooth in the neck of the badger" Said LeafPool Walking over to FuzzyFur "there is?" Said FuzzyFur "Yes Let me look at that mouth" Said LeafPool examining the mouth She said "Your missing a tooth and You mouth is bleeding" "BLEEDING!!!!"Yelled FuzzyFur.

-Back at ShadowClan
"Where have you been?" asked everyone. "Hunting. . " RedSky ussually replied. She was bleeding at the back, and people thought she had fought a clan cat. Finally one of the apprentices sniffed her and shouted out "RedSky smells like ThunderClan!!" "SSHHHHHHH" whispered RedSky. "don't just get me in trouble like that.!" That night the gathering cats had been picked and RedSky was one of them. The medicine cat tended to her wounds and she slept. .. peacefully"

"Thanks for fixing me up LeafPool" Said FuzzyFur, Sitting down "LeafPool I got some herbs for you" Said the cat, As she set down the herbs. "Thank You AerialHeart, Oh and FuzzyFur You should rest here tonight Your going to the gathering tommorow" Said LeafPool. "Alright" Said FuzzyFur "I can See RedSky Again." Thought FuzzyFur. As he fell asleep.

That morning at ShadowClan RedSky woke up very drowzy. "agh," she groaned. "I'll have to last the day. Maybe I'll hunt some, that might wake me up." So RedSky ran out of the clan and hunted. An hour later she brought back a muse and rabbits. As soon as she finished eating she heard the announcement. "It's time to go to the gathering!"

"Yes! there's another!" said FuzzyFur Jumping at all the mouses "FuzzyFur you don't think that's strange at all?" Said LeafPool walking by his side on there way to the gathering "if we can eat it.... Nope" Said FuzzyFur in a playful voice, but after that FuzzyFur Started to feel weird, like a dangerous worry "H-Hey LeafPool have you ever got a feeling that somthing bad was gonna happen?" said FuzzyFur, "some times" Said Leafpool

At the gathering RedSky spotted FuzzyFur walking with LeafPool. "Hey! FuzzyFur! Over here!" She yelled. FuzzyFur was her only friend. FuzzyFur left LeafPools side and ran up to RedSky. "Hey FuzzyFur," she mewed. "I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen. "What about you?" She asked. Before FuzzyFur could answer RedSky the gathering started. The ShadowClan leader started. "Some of my warriors followed RedSky's scent last night," they started. "And it led to somewhere near the border but not very close to it. Then one rabbit jump away we smelled ThunderClan cat. You have been spying on us ThunderClan!!" The cat finished. "Oh, no! FuzzyFur! They've caught me!!,"she started startled. "Not just that but we've shifted the clan alliances!!"

"WAIT!!!! I was in the ShadowClan But that was only cuase RedSky and me fought a badger!" Said FuzzyFur, The ShadowClan Leader Jumped down in front of FuzzyFur"Really? that is the worst lie ever!" said The ShadowClan leader laughing "It's true We have the badger at are camp!"Said LeafPool, "I want to see for my self, LeafPool shall you come with me to show me." said the ShadowClans leader in a calm voice.
"phew that was close, for a second there I thought someth-Gya!" Said FuzzyFur pinned down by another cat "Hello Everyone, I would like to make an annoucement." said the cat "I am the leader of a new clan LakeClan." Said the cat in an evil voice.

"LakeClan?! But there are only supposed to be 4 clans in the forest and we allready have RiverClan!" said RedSky hatefully. She knew this cat was up to no good. "RedSky! yelled one of WindClans warriors. "Let the cat talk!" She finished. "Hmph fine. . " RedSky said knowing nothing good would come out of this.

"Don't you mean five clans? there was bloodClan, SkyClan, & now theres LakeClan! muhaha" As The cat said that, cats came out of the lake more and more until there where thousands."By the way My name is LakeStar" Said LakeStar "And I'll do what you did to the others! drive them out!Muhaha" just as he said that all his cats started to attack