day of horror

Chapter 1

One night i went out i saw that all the nabourhood lights were out. i walked down the street to see ware any lights on i saw blood at a door.i looked at the window i saw a man was peking out i ran down to my house i saw that my lights were out aswell i knocked no one anserd i herd a noise like footsteps i looked and got hit whit a steel crow bar.
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i woek up and i was in a dark place i tried to stand up i fell back down i grabid on too something and got up and walcked on untill i got to a dedend.on the othere side i herd a voice saying who are you? u should not be here go .i said why ? he said the beast was born today and is out here NOW!. i ran!i heard a loud NOISE strange noise that man said RUN!! ITS THE BEAST! i ran and fell the beast jumpet over the wall and ran twords me it was the scariest day of my life NOOO!!! he bit my foot and my head!. at the last minoute i was deid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE END!!!!! My story is **** i know it

It's not bad at all. You are very creative. ^.^

it's good, and creative.

and no cussing snake T_T